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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（5）
时间飞逝，转眼间同学们进入九年级已有三个月了，在繁忙的学习生活中，我们有困惑、泪水；也有进步、喜悦。请根据以下提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。
学习生活
老师
工作认真；严格但充满爱心；……
学生
课上：认真听讲；尊敬老师
课后：互相帮助；按时交作业
课余生活
因为太多的作业，没有足够的时间从事业余爱好.
电视：每周一次或两次观看自己最喜欢的节目。男生喜欢……，因为……；女生喜欢……，因为……
体育运动：每天锻炼半小时，如：……
音乐：在课间欣赏，大多数人喜欢听……觉得它……
愿望
通过努力，每个学生能取得更多的进步；……（自由发挥1-2点）。
注意: 1. 词数:100字左右;文章的开头和末尾已经给出,不计入单词总数;
2. 内容必须包括表中的要点, 并作补充，但不要逐字翻译 3. 条理清楚，语句连贯。
Our school life in Grade Nine
It is over three months since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, ___________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Our school life in Grade Nine
It is over three months since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, our teachers work carefully. They all have a heart full of love. Though they are strict, they care about every student. We students listen to the teacher carefully in class. We respect the teachers very much. After class, we help each other and always hand in our homework on time.
Because of too much homework, we don’t have enough time to do our hobbies. Though we are busy with our study, we still live a colorful life. We watch our favorite TV programmes once or twice a week. Many boys like watching sports programmes because they think these programmes are exciting. Many girls like watching documentaries because they can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events from them. We also do sports for half an hour every day, such as running and playing ball games. What’s more, we enjoy music during the break. Most of us like listening to classical music because it can help us relax.
As a Grade 9 student, I hope we can make more progress in our study through hard work. And I believe that we can enter the ideal high school successfully next year.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍九年级学生的校园生活，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。本文结构紧凑 文中介绍了朋友很多的优点，最后引出在他母亲生日的时候他决定给母亲亲自制作一个卡片。He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with maths problems.；How lucky I am to have such a good friend！这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：提纲类作文。 -