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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达(6)
根据下面提示,以“The art form I like best”为题写一篇关于你最喜欢的艺术形式的文章,字数不少于90词。
1.有多种艺术形式,我最喜欢音乐。
2.音乐能让伤心的人振作起来, 能给人力量。
3 我已经去过好几场音乐会,很多年轻人高度评价汪峰的歌。
4.古典音乐有永恒的价值,是艺术宝藏,我认为很值得倾听。
5.希望……。
The art form I like best
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【答案】
The art form I like best
Art is full of beauty, art is filled with sweat. Art has many kinds of forms. The art form I Iike best is the music. Music can make sad people cheer up, and it can also give a person power. I have been to several concerts, and a lot of young people spoke highly of Mr Wang's songs. I like Classical music. Classical music have eternal value, it is art treasure. I think it's worth listening to it. I hope Wang can bring more good works for us. We will always support you, Mr Wang.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于提纲类短文,话题是“The art form I like best”, 仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的 短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:这是一篇比较优秀的作文,本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;应用了我们熟悉的句型和短语Art is full of beauty, art is filled with sweat./ many kinds of/ make sad people cheer up等,语言表达要符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。
考点:考查提纲类作文。 -