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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（10）
学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，Jack的话题是 “对我影响最深的人”，请根据以下材料，帮他组织一篇100字左右英文演讲稿，介绍一下三位对他影响最深的人，并说说你的感想.
Persons
Job
Details
My mother
a teacher
1. forties;
2. full of love（至少举一例说明）;
3. decide to donate her body after her death
Tan Dun
a composer
1. born in Hunan, China；
2. help build a bridge between the East and the West;
3. bring Chinese and Western music together;
Jackie Chan
a film star
1. nearly 100 films, join humour and exciting action together
2. win many awards;
3. spend many years doing charity work;
The persons who have influenced me most
I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.
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【答案】
The persons who have influenced me most
I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.
My mother is a teacher. She is in her forties. She has a heart full of love and she has donated blood many times . To my surprise, she has decid ed to donate her body after her death.
Tan Dun is a composer. He was born in Hunan, China. He has helped build a bridge between the East and the West. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.
Jackie Chan is a film star. He has acted in nearly 100 films, In the films, he joined humo ur and exciting action together perfectly. He has won many awards. He is also a humanitarian. He has spent many years doing charity work. He is thought highly of by many people.
They are all my heroes. They are really worth learning from.
【解析】
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
考点：提示性作文 -